Another try at a Villanelle. "Subtraction Needed"

I can’t tell if these are forced rhymes or not. Does it makes sense at all?

Subtraction Needed

 

1 In my house there is too much stuff

2 filled with tools and treasures I need.

3 When does collecting feel like enough?

 

4 Vases and tea cups, even powder puffs,   

5 old make-up, earrings, and strings of beads.

1 In my house there is too much stuff.

 

6 David Winter cottages, scarves, and a muff,

7 pencils and notebooks, many books to read.

3 When does collecting feel like enough?

 

8 If I bring in more, nothing is sloughed off

9 from the burden of owning I want to be freed.

1 In my house there is too much stuff.

 

10 What can I recycle or toss in a huff?

11 Buy nothing new is the opposite of greed.

3 When does collecting feel like enough?

 

12 Too many clothes? Let me live in the buff.

13 Subtract what I own is becoming my creed.

1 In my house there is too much stuff

3 when does collecting feel like enough?

EDITED and new title:

Subtraction

 

My house is filled with too much stuff  

jammed with treasures and tools I need.

When does collecting feel like enough?

 

Vases and tea cups, even powder puffs,   

old make-up, earrings, and strings of beads.

My house is filled with too much stuff.  

 

David Winter cottages, scarves, and a muff,

pencils, journals, and books to read.

When does collecting feel like enough?

 

When I bring in more, nothing is sloughed.

This burden of owning – I want to be freed.

 My house is filled with too much stuff.  

 

What can I recycle, or toss in a huff?

Buy nothing new: a cure for greed.

When does collecting feel like enough?

 

Too many clothes? Let me live in the buff.

Subtract what I own is becoming my creed.

My house is filled with too much stuff,  

when does collecting feel like enough?